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Discreet Carnival by ~Hells-Preacher:iconHells-Preacher:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


An old understanding, why break it,
Twist it for your own carnival,
Asphyxiation, your game,
Bury me alive with your spiteful dirt,

Breathe easy, as you can,
You have me by the throat,
Refusing to accept the change of time,
Let it go, it is over,

You have your discreet victory already,
Praise it as a life source you need,
Without it you are flawed,
Journey with this blessing in disguise,

A soothing distance we keep,
Rest your head, its over,
The War we ignited, extinguished,
Let it rest, the movement will arrive soon.
©2005-2008 ~Hells-Preacher
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~girlwithsoul:icongirlwithsoul: Feb 14, 2005, 9:59:26 PM
you use quite complicated language. makes it hard to understand. i get the first two verses....then again it is 5am, and im getting tired. th'oul mind aint so quick. ill read it again later...try to understand better. i like it though, at least, the first two verses...*collapses on keyboard from exhaustion* mhdl\vnhd\lwkeerhjk\jrjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj jjjjjjj......
~Hells-Preacher:iconHells-Preacher: Feb 15, 2005, 10:37:15 AM
I have a unique style, Observation and riddles, a very hard mixture to comprehend . Makes a greater victory when you work it out though . :nod:

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~insanity-streak:iconinsanity-streak: Feb 16, 2005, 3:53:19 AM
Wow. for a word i've heard *that* many times on CSI i had no idea thats how you spell Asphyxiation... its a great poem, very good use of language. seriously though i think it leaves the ending up to decide if he went back or not.. thats how it seems to me anyway.

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~girlwithsoul:icongirlwithsoul: Feb 16, 2005, 10:51:34 AM
ok. im gonna try again...just for that buzz of feeling smart when i work it out :P
~Hells-Preacher:iconHells-Preacher: Feb 23, 2005, 3:13:22 AM
Good guess :D

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-- Team Disgruntled -- :| :horns:

" Dead . Red . Army "
~Hells-Preacher:iconHells-Preacher: Feb 23, 2005, 10:46:32 AM
:P Go for it m'dear.

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-- Team Disgruntled -- :| :horns:

" Dead . Red . Army "
~girlwithsoul:icongirlwithsoul: Feb 24, 2005, 6:58:31 AM
heh heh...look at me go!!!
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